Select an “eating ritual” or “eating environment” for close observation and commentary. The ritual or environment you choose may be new or part of your daily routine. Record or take notes of your observations. You will want to shape and convey a message of your own observation as freshly and meaningfully as possible. Your commentary will need to include a thesis. It may be something like, ” High school cafeteria lunches are often not about eating but about maintaing social connections.” You will want to include your observations of your eating environment as evidence to support your idea.
Your blog will be graded on the following:
Thesis (Supported Observation) (5 points)
Evidence (5 points)
Organization (5 points)
Use of description, imagery, and/or other rhetorical strategies (5 points)
Student sample from AP English Language and Composition: Rhetoric in Pre-20th-Century Texts Curriculum Module:
“There is steady, relentless rhythm during every meal taken in the school cafeteria. And beyond the general lunchtime beat and bustle followed by everyone in the giant blue room, there is also some specific, routine way that mealtimes unfold at any given table. For example, the same two people might always sit beside each other. Or maybe everyone at the table claims an “assigned” seat. Some people might even take the exact same meal every day. The entire experience is usually quite predictable.
On the other hand, there’s a less predictable element of a school cafeteria lunch: the social portion. Lunch in a high school cafeteria is more than jsut a mundane daily ritual; it’s usually the only time in the patterned school day during which extened groups of friends or acquaintances can sit and socialize, uninterrupted. The steady rumble and hum of the lunchroom indicates that nearly everyone revels in this opportunity. Most people don’t even seem to realize they are inhaling food in their seventeen free minutes, so busy are they relating stories, telling jokes, and trying to help each other get homework done. Lunch is almost never limited to only what you bought or brought. At my lunch table in particular, I know that at least half the table is involved in grazing, reaching onto plates for food that doesn’t belong to them. Most days, it’s a veritable smorgasbord.
So lunch in a high school cafeteria is about alking, and it’s about sharing. The eating seems almost incidental. Maybe the ritualistic nature of almost all eating accounts for this; the routines are so familiar, so unimportant, and so often tasteless, that we can focus ourselves in talk. And while eating is obviously a neccessary part of our lives, if you were to ask just about any teenager what the most important part of lunch is to them, they would probably not replay with “food;” they would tell you it’s time with their friends.”
(Essay written by student from Mt. Arat High School).